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02-01-2010, 01:29 AM
on the first signature
5/10 getting there
too simple noting special has been done and quite simple
you can try adding some colors to the sky
it's usually a bad idea to do things to the render unless its playing with the colors a bit
focus leads away from the focal on the render
2nd one is your best
6.5/10
try making the text smaller and mabey a diffrent font - need to make it easier to see
tacking the blue on the left side could help and have the original colors put back
then add small blur to the bg
3rd
3/10
Last edited by Player_; 02-01-2010 at 01:34 AM..
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