First sig: constructive criticism requested

obsolete · **First sig: constructive criticism requested -** 03-09-2009, 12:43 AM

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King Drahcir · 03-09-2009, 12:48 AM

id try a border personally.

looking good so far. Dunno much about the programs your using though.

ohrly · 03-09-2009, 01:34 AM

Nice work. Try changing the size of the render, I think it's a bit big. Downsizing it a tiny bit would make it much more attractive.

Pandolfo · 03-09-2009, 06:20 AM

I like it, I wouldn't use a border or downsize the render.

Looks like youre character is in the backdrop, that it's a real world and not a background. Which is what you're supposed to be trying to do.

The dimensions of the picture are odd though. The guy is clearly supposed to be the center object, but the frame is too large for him, or there's not enough of him in the frame. But then doing that also brings the background into the forefront of the picture, and makes it more tangible.

I think it's fine as is. Might look better if the dude was doing something with the gun.

obsolete · 03-09-2009, 06:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pandolfo

The dimensions of the picture are odd though. The guy is clearly supposed to be the center object, but the frame is too large for him, or there's not enough of him in the frame.

I noticed that, too... Only after I posted though

I never saved any of the works in progress, so it's going to be annoying to re-do (all my attempts so far aren't as good) so... On to the next sig!

Thanks for your input, everyone!

mexklow · 03-09-2009, 06:47 AM

ehehehehehhe

obsolete · 03-09-2009, 06:59 AM

Now here we go! I'm much happier with this one.

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mexklow · 03-09-2009, 07:37 AM

did lucy live in the end of elfenlied?

obsolete · 03-09-2009, 07:40 AM

It is hinted that she did. I can't remember well enough to properly explain how though.

mexklow · 03-09-2009, 07:42 AM

is their a ova? so to tell me what happened

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obsolete Lolicon Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Alberta, Canada	First sig: constructive criticism requested - 03-09-2009, 12:43 AM [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] Used GIMP, about 1/2 hour tinkering around. Thanks to Static for [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] and [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] (which I barely followed but served as a great general guideline)

King Drahcir Shi No Tenshi Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Oklahoma	03-09-2009, 12:48 AM id try a border personally. looking good so far. Dunno much about the programs your using though.

ohrly yarly Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Canada	03-09-2009, 01:34 AM Nice work. Try changing the size of the render, I think it's a bit big. Downsizing it a tiny bit would make it much more attractive.

mexklow Innovator Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: japan	03-09-2009, 06:47 AM ehehehehehhe http://myanimelist.net/profile/sundeath

obsolete Lolicon Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Alberta, Canada	03-09-2009, 06:59 AM Now here we go! I'm much happier with this one. [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

mexklow Innovator Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: japan	03-09-2009, 07:37 AM did lucy live in the end of elfenlied? http://myanimelist.net/profile/sundeath

obsolete Lolicon Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Alberta, Canada	03-09-2009, 07:40 AM It is hinted that she did. I can't remember well enough to properly explain how though. "Life is a riot!" Try saying that 10,000 times a day! You'll go really insane and forget all your worries!

mexklow Innovator Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: japan	03-09-2009, 07:42 AM is their a ova? so to tell me what happened http://myanimelist.net/profile/sundeath