[Duratrix]

Originally Posted by kirakyuubi

okay i added a slight yellow/orange layer of the render and putted a re-made poem of unlimited blade works in it

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/1...herubwlsv7.jpg

so what do you people think?

Yeah is good, the render matches the background a bit better now. ^^
There's just this thing that bugs me, it's supposed to be 'sleep' and not 'slep'. xD

[kirakyuubi]

how did i miss that typo lol
ok heres the fixed version
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/686...herubwlsv9.jpg

[monkeychacha]

Originally Posted by kirakyuubi

okay i added a slight yellow/orange layer of the render and putted a re-made poem of unlimited blade works in it

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/1...herubwlsv7.jpg

so what do you people think?

Let me see... the render is somewhat too sharp when compared to the background, maybe you can find a higher resolution version of that bg or if you feel manly enough, you can vector the swords and paint the sky and ground. Also, you need to put some of that yellow/red light along the edges of the render (just a tiny bit though), if you do that the edges of the render will become softer and will mix better with the background as well. Then the shadow that Konata is casting is too dark/black, try to make it a darker shade of the ground color and blur/smudge the edges to soften it up a bit. And about the text, try to play a around with different fonts, colors, transparency, and placement since it is too simple at the moment.

[kirakyuubi]

okay here is another go
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/734...herubwls10.jpg

[Duratrix]

Originally Posted by kirakyuubi

okay here is another go
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/734...herubwls10.jpg

The text is better.
You need to work on your shadow (maybe use a gaussian blur), also you went a bit too far in adding another color to your render (in my opinion at least).

I think the char fits the bg well now.
Also, the text looks good.
Dura's right about the shadow thing, but i have no idea what to do to it.
keep it up ^^

[kirakyuubi]

ok i removed the second color layer and redid the shadow
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/4...erubwlsv12.jpg

now im gonna clean it to improve some parts

[Duratrix]

Originally Posted by kirakyuubi

ok i removed the second color layer and redid the shadow
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/4...erubwlsv12.jpg

now im gonna clean it to improve some parts

Yeah that looks good, now you could give the shadow a gaussian blur filter (this will blur the edges a bit, how much depends on the number you enter).
Also make sure the shadow is placed correctly. Place it lower cuz now there is shadow above the feet...

Good job so far, keep it up!

[kirakyuubi]

yea i noticed that too but i already fixed that ^^

edit:
Final
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/207...erubwlsv13.jpg
Final with no text
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/207...erubwlsv13.jpg

It's a good work friend, I like it. I personally prefer textless walls but that's personal.
Now we have to convince everyone else to do moar stuff