Natsu's Art

NatsuDragneel · **Natsu's Art -** 01-11-2011, 10:41 AM

Hey guys, these are just some concept drawings I've done to help design the characters of my novel. I am not a professional, so this is about all I can do.
I'll post more artwork once I get it uploaded later, but let's see what you think of these ones.

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Ra97oR · 01-11-2011, 11:34 AM

The proportion for the humans are fine, overall it looks pretty good. Just one thing I have noticed, the face on the characters they all look kinda similar.

Duratrix · 01-11-2011, 01:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Ra97oR

The proportion for the humans are fine, overall it looks pretty good. Just one thing I have noticed, the face on the characters they all look kinda similar.

They look like elves to me. xD
And the proportions aren't correct. He is drawing the legs too long (not that many people will notice this).
On all 3 "elves" drawings, he draws the elbow on a different place.
The muscles are also wrong... Where did the biceps go? lol

But they're good for a novice. ^_^

UnknownFact2 · 01:35 PM

Guy with armor: something weird about the legs :S
Lady: seems fine, but yes legs a little little bit too long, mostly between the knees and the feet.
Third guy: hands are at the same height as the belt, and that's wrong

Also we need biceps!

Minor details actually, practice make the master.

Ra97oR · 01-11-2011, 01:35 PM

Actually the only one I think it looks strange is the third guy. Comparing how some anime and manga have longggg legs, its not all too bad here.

Shadow Tearz · 01-11-2011, 01:59 PM

practice more...and they re nice...keep it up

aimiko63 · 01-11-2011, 06:00 PM

wow how nice..

NatsuDragneel · 01-11-2011, 09:03 PM

Thanks for the compliments and advice everyone, they are appreciated. Yeah, I actually get told a lot that I make the legs too long, but drawing isn't exactly my forte, so what can you do?
I'm more of a writer anyways.

Here's a couple more that I finished recently.

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misk · 02-24-2011, 09:16 AM

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Duratrix · 02-24-2011, 08:49 PM

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Yes, they're removed. You could've mentioned that on his profile page though.

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Ra97oR Creeper Join Date: Jan 2011	01-11-2011, 11:34 AM The proportion for the humans are fine, overall it looks pretty good. Just one thing I have noticed, the face on the characters they all look kinda similar. [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

Ra97oR Creeper Join Date: Jan 2011	01-11-2011, 01:35 PM Actually the only one I think it looks strange is the third guy. Comparing how some anime and manga have longggg legs, its not all too bad here. [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

Shadow Tearz pitch black Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Life After Death....	01-11-2011, 01:59 PM practice more...and they re nice...keep it up http://www.animetake.com/forums/news-announcements/32594-concerning-nsfw-stuff.html

aimiko63 Narutard Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Philippines	01-11-2011, 06:00 PM wow how nice..

misk Narutard Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Los Angeles	02-24-2011, 09:16 AM "This image or video has been moved or deleted"