[JanAriel]

Just re-read and...

Originally Posted by Asura

thx
thats mouse and pen tool XD

You did WHAT!? O_O that's incredible...

[misk]

Originally Posted by Asura

thx, using PS, AE and Illustrator depend what I want to create ^^




which one???

glad you like them I will make some more vector style signature soon just need more time ^^

The first sig on your second post.
It has the guy turning his back and there's a lot of vivid colors ^__^

[Asura]

Originally Posted by JanAriel

SUGOI!

I'm baffled by your work, so far

thx really glad you like them ^^

Originally Posted by purupurupuru

wow howd u do that water droplet one

It was one of my older animation signatures ^^
I could try to explain it but I am really bad in it, thats one of the reasons why I only made 2 tutorials so far XD

Originally Posted by JanAriel

Just re-read and...



You did WHAT!? O_O that's incredible...

Its not, belive me, it only takes a lot of time and I am still a beginner when it comes to vector work

Originally Posted by misk

The first sig on your second post.
It has the guy turning his back and there's a lot of vivid colors ^__^

oh my first full vector signature ^^
also one of my favourite

[Asura]

a little update

my latest 4 signatures ^^

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[Akmola Lola]

i liked the last from your 4 sigs above.. no.3 is good too..

but why your sig is getting darker and darker.. ??? i check ur 1st few sigs posted and it was really 'happy' kind of mood..

[Asura]

thx ^^

hmmm I guess I like darker style more, dont know why, only my latest is not so dark

[saber101]

awesome i like the last sig the best but overall all of them are really good they all blend in the background well which i have trouble with still :/

[misk]

some actual critique here: Your recent post with the sigs...they're all over brightened. Especially the one with the sand-time thing. It's so bright, that it's almost unrecognizable.
Also, for the first, second, and fourth sig, there are overlapping layer on it...that are smudged and sharpened...it's distracting. It's just such a big contrast from the render (in brightness, color, and shape) that it's distracting me from the focal point. Because of it, my eyes automatically goes to the overlapping layer. The first sig looks like a bunch of smoggy clouds on top, which is also really distrcting.

At first, it seems to be visually appealing, but if you really break it apart and analyze the sigs, there's just a bunch of light and smudged layers on top. It's distracting and there seems to be no flow in the sigs (except the third one...you just over brightened the focal point).

But I also like how you play with your type, especially in the last sig.

Good stuff + good luck!

[Asura]

Originally Posted by saber101

awesome i like the last sig the best but overall all of them are really good they all blend in the background well which i have trouble with still :/

thx ^^
you just have to play around more and you will find a way to do it ^^

Originally Posted by misk

some actual critique here: Your recent post with the sigs...they're all over brightened. Especially the one with the sand-time thing. It's so bright, that it's almost unrecognizable.
Also, for the first, second, and fourth sig, there are overlapping layer on it...that are smudged and sharpened...it's distracting. It's just such a big contrast from the render (in brightness, color, and shape) that it's distracting me from the focal point. Because of it, my eyes automatically goes to the overlapping layer. The first sig looks like a bunch of smoggy clouds on top, which is also really distrcting.

At first, it seems to be visually appealing, but if you really break it apart and analyze the sigs, there's just a bunch of light and smudged layers on top. It's distracting and there seems to be no flow in the sigs (except the third one...you just over brightened the focal point).

But I also like how you play with your type, especially in the last sig.

Good stuff + good luck!

wow thx for the critique ^^

and I agree to all what you said to them, I was working with smudge at that time a lot, to get better in it, and I know they are to bright but that was on pupose so that they stand out more in the sotw
also I dont really wanted to create a flow in the signatures, since they are not to show movements or anything, it was more about composition and like I said working on smudge skills ^^

but again thx for the critique and advice really apreciate it ^^

also what do you mean with good luck xD

[misk]

Originally Posted by Asura

thx ^^
you just have to play around more and you will find a way to do it ^^




wow thx for the critique ^^

and I agree to all what you said to them, I was working with smudge at that time a lot, to get better in it, and I know they are to bright but that was on pupose so that they stand out more in the sotw
also I dont really wanted to create a flow in the signatures, since they are not to show movements or anything, it was more about composition and like I said working on smudge skills ^^

but again thx for the critique and advice really apreciate it ^^

also what do you mean with good luck xD

Smudging can get tricky -.-
What I meant by flow wasn't in terms of movement, it was in terms of composition.
Your composition and renders seems like it's just there. The renders and the environment/composition it was set in isn't interacting with each other. They're not cohesive.
I hope that's a better explaination

And by good luck, I meant getting better at what you like. haha.
"Good luck" does sound weird ._.