[Duratrix]

Short Story Of The Month #6
- Voting Thread -
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Genre: Ecchi/Erotic
Theme: Frrreeeestyle!!

Start voting on the best story!! ^^
Please give a brief explanation for your vote.
It is not necessary, but it is appreciated.

You can't vote for yourself. Voting for yourself will lead to a disqualification of your entry.
The entries are compressed as zip files, so when you click the link... you'll download them. Read them and vote.

Have fun reading and vote for the best one!

Voting will end Sunday (29th of august 2010)


You can read the texts online, click on this link: N/A

ENTRIES:
Entry 01:
> Void.zip <

Entry 02:
> Ssotm 6 - Lone House.zip <

Entry 03:
> Ssotm.zip <

Batch file - (Contains all entries)
> ssotm 06 (batch).zip <

[TTally]

I voted for #2.

It had the detail I like (maybe too much.. took a long time to read!) and there was no incest (sorry 3, I had bad memories with "Oniiiiiiii~chaaaaaan!).

[ArchieBlaye]

I'm done reading the entries, and my vote goes to #2 as well.

Although a bit confusing at first, some parts felt kind of off and it had a bit of repetition, the end took a good turn, causing it to receive my vote.

[gundestiny]

My vote is for #1
While albit predictable, I liked the flow and momentum ^^
Ending leaves you wanting more ><

[Baka Baka]

Originally Posted by TTally

I voted for #2.

It had the detail I like (maybe too much.. took a long time to read!) and there was no incest (sorry 3, I had bad memories with "Oniiiiiiii~chaaaaaan!).

No problem. Vote for whatever you want. It IS voting. xD

[Asmi]

Originally Posted by gundestiny

My vote is for #1
While albit predictable, I liked the flow and momentum ^^
Ending leaves you wanting more ><

Truuue.

[Darkchao45]

#2 ftw!

[Fatentity]

#1 is very solid, that's the only way I can think to put it from how the bottom of page 3 made me feel. I can't seem to find much to say about it, as for as the writing style and such. It had a "real" feeling to it, and the slight mystery behind the yellow house was good (I'm assuming it's something bad with his father). There wasn't much ecchi, but that was a good quick erotic scene. I think I just really enjoyed how you presented his tormententation in the present from his past. Story wise I would give it 7/10, but enjoyment was a good 8. Too bad there isn't more, I would enjoy reading more :].

#3 LoL I think someone has been playing too many Gal Games! <3. A tip, I enjoy the use of Japanese words/phrases as well *We all like Anime after all*, but if your going to do that, you need to keep it consistent, at least it was a turn off for me since it wasn't. You would use Onii-Chan, but then Mom & Dad. The half normal and half Japanese bothered me. The little school girl bit was amusing though.

You're story is enjoyable, but your writing style is a bit...jumbled, at least that's how I felt. I mean, I enjoy how you write things, but I think you can write it better/clearer/you need to make it flow a little better. Then again how you did write it, as if we were in her head, added to the stories cuteness, I feel like I'm reading an actual Anime, it's strange but yet funny/enjoyable.

That was so naughty....but the bit of her remembering why she loves him was sweet. The whole middle of the story is super cute. This is making it such a tough choice who to vote for! Until the "True Ending" didn't have the scene it should!

The multiple choice was interesting...you did base this off an H game.

All in All I think I like both. How #1 was written and presented was much better. But the cuteness and sheer enjoyment of #3 was worth the long read. I almost don't want to vote since I like both nearly equally. But #3 had a bit of an awkwardness to it, so I'm voting for #1.

Close though! I really wanted to make this a three way tie too!

Also, thank you all very much for the feedback!
I see Yellow and Baka Baka haven't voted yet! Lazies!

[Naughty Shrink]

I voted for #1. Even though the story wasn't the best the writing style was by far superior to the others

[TTally]

Originally Posted by Naughty Shrink

I voted for #1. Even though the story wasn't the best the writing style was by far superior to the others

Care to elaborate? That's not a very good post in that it does not have a reason WHY.