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Default 04-12-2009, 10:27 AM

Hey, ure the one who said my mind exploded


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Default 04-14-2009, 10:05 PM

Animeosts.net is back & I found an old poem while checking out the new layout.
Date 2007, I think...

Haven
Sakura drops, drifting down
onto the still surface of Vante lake.
Her racing heart stops, its beat quieting,
shivering ripples skimming across.
Sweet nightengale atop stiff branches
of sighing, mellow trees, notes carried on the air.

Calm, a caressing wind blows,
cherry, sun kissed willows, a hint of snow
and purple, green, red her sleepy heart flows
with lazy currents, the parts its wont to show
as one they are, river goddess Vanteya all knows.


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Default 04-14-2009, 10:44 PM

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Animeosts.net is back & I found an old poem while checking out the new layout.
Date 2007, I think...

Haven
Sakura drops, drifting down
onto the still surface of Vante lake.
Her racing heart stops, its beat quieting,
shivering ripples skimming across.
Sweet nightengale atop stiff branches
of sighing, mellow trees, notes carried on the air.

Calm, a caressing wind blows,
cherry, sun kissed willows, a hint of snow
and purple, green, red her sleepy heart flows
with lazy currents, the parts its wont to show
as one they are, river goddess Vanteya all knows.
So that's where you got your name from.


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Default 04-15-2009, 10:14 AM

Lol. Nah, already had the name . It's the name of the 1st xter I created, there's alot of me thrown in the mix so i figured i'd use the name.


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Default 04-26-2009, 07:19 PM

wow seems a nice topic.. i try to write although my English is not so good


Peace n War

People fight for things they desire
they fight with might n pride
claiming their rights although they are the one who take peoples' right

human ooo human why you fight,
does the responsibility of killing people is that light,
does the price of blood n tears is that cheap.

war war n war
battles of blood go on
reason by reason have been made
do all the reasons more important than the deceased ones
or do the deaths are insignificant until we do not need to give a reason

Peace ooo peace please come to our hand,
may we can live without be harmed n harm
may we can live without prejudices n hate
may we can smile with each others with love n sincerity
may we live in peace n tranquility till to the end of days

p/s: if people want to fight so bad just go to any pk online server , and go fight all night long
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Default 04-26-2009, 08:14 PM

Well! Hats off to ur enthusiasm!!!!
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Default 04-27-2009, 03:03 AM

hurrah ^_^
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Default 06-25-2009, 09:13 AM

Just Broken
"I'm not dead, just broken" she chants,
tears slipping down her face,
choking the words, a stone fist in her chest.
All is grey behind eyelids heavy and aching.

Yet she chants "I'm not dead, just broken".
A new mantra, thanks to pop / rock artist
Pink blaring in her ears.
On the empty streets of Melaka, she staggers alone.

Alone & hurting. Always searching for him.
Her love, her life, her doom.
The reason behind her every foray into romance.
Her demon knight, heroin, the driving monkey on her bowed back.

Today she found him. A mere glimpse,
a sliver of his utter destruction in another.
The glory of her triumph eaten away by the pain of recognition,
her badly healed scars burst open anew.

Sighting home, the tears, a private thing, cease
but still she chants "I'm not dead, just broken".


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Post 06-30-2009, 08:01 PM

i once

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Post hi - 07-09-2009, 12:09 PM

hi hi hi

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