[imSOecchi]

Emma had just finished playing her gig in the bar. Nial sat attentively hanging on to her every note. He looked at her on stage with love in his eyes. "This is the girl for me" he whispered to himself. He had been pondering whether or not tonight was the night to confess to her. They had went for a meal earlier and friends had seen them together. They asked openly if the two were a couple or not yet and they both shyly bowed their heads in opposite directions, but both knew that this wasn't just two friends having lunch together. They were bonding after a long period of silently loving each other.

When Emma finished playing her music at the bar Nial gently took her hand and guided her off the stage. Though Emma being the clumsy girl that she is fell straight into his arms. Their eyes met in a warm embrace before their dignity and uncertainty of each others feelings made them break their gaze.

"Is it alright if I walk you home" said Nial.

"sh-sure" gasped Emma Nervously.

She picked up her guitar and took her bicycle in hand outside. As they walked alone in the moonlight along a road beside the beach. they began reminiscing about the first time they met.

"Will you play that tune for me again?" Said Nial abruptly.

Emma stopped and her face turned red before finally uttering. "Ok, if its for you..."

Emma began to hum the tune to her song when Nial interrupted her once more.

"Humming the tune is great an all but would you play it for me?" Said Nial as he picked up her guitar and softly handed it to her.

" I don't have words to it yet but I'll play for you..... if you like" Emma said cutely parting her hair to one side.

Emma began to hum the tune once more only this time she played her guitar beautifully with a sincere look in her eyes. The two were standing a few feet apart from each other in the moonlight. As she sang Nial noticed a large golden stone on the ground which he picked up and held in his hand, he examined it with an intensity on his face ... like a butterfly had just landed on his palm.

Emma got a stroke of genius all of a sudden and began to sing to the tune that she was originally humming..............

"The golden seashell............ under the moon light.........gave us its blessing...... gazing at time"


Nial stopped and gave her a cold stare. This startled Emma and she stopped playing. "You don't like it?"' She said, shyly twisting her toe into the soil.

When out of nowhere Nial threw the stone at her face with all his strength.

"AHHH!" Screamed Emma as the thud hit her fore hea.

"It's a FUCKING STONE you stuuuuuuuuupid CUNT!!!!!!!!!!!" Yelled Nial spraying Emma with his spit as he rolled the u.

Emma began screaming "What!? why wh- wh- wh- what are you doing Nial!!!!!!!!!!!"

Tears began streaming from her eyes as she cowered Nial lifted the stone again and threw it at her harder this time. "FUCCCCCK!" Nial roared as he slapped her hard enough to take her off her feet and bust the inside of her cheek. Blood began pouring from her mouth as she held her face and started crawling away all the while tears pouring from her face.

Nial started to stomp on her clothes and kick her as he jumped around like some sort of crazed neanderthal holding his head and screaming "You Slut!!! Fucking stones, Fucking stones, Fucking stones, FUCKING STONES!!!!!!!!!!!!" He screamed as he pulled off his top and ran into the darkness...

The End.





Well any thoughts?

[Vinn]

i was left speechless... lol'd =)

[imSOecchi]

Thanks brah

[gamerman191]

Well....that was something.

[rebellion1991]

well.................that was an interesting story.....

[Tanail]

I like it, even if i hoped for a happy end

[ghostthegreat]

Interesting to say the least.... You have a story there, could use some work in the grammar and presentation of it, but you do have a weird/intriguing concept to work with!

[evereternal7]

Was the stone cursed or what?
definitely misleading title

[imSOecchi]

Originally Posted by ghostthegreat

Interesting to say the least.... You have a story there, could use some work in the grammar and presentation of it, but you do have a weird/intriguing concept to work with!

Thanks man praise from a published author.... [struts]

Yea I was thinking of developing after reading it a few times and seeing various peoples responses, though I got a bit of writers black trying to think of were to go next. I was considering making the whole thing about the guy coming back and acting like nothing had ever happened... the girl contacts authorities.... lulz ensues

Originally Posted by evereternal7

Was the stone cursed or what?
definitely misleading title

I would have told you if I hadn't considered writing more, you'll just have to wait and see lol

I couldn't really have told you that it wasn't a run of the mill romance story... it would have ruined the surprise, which, if I do say so myself... was brilliantly concealed

[Fatentity]

Um....wtf @ ending?

Well....good enough story, liked it...till the stone....then I'm not sure.