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Lieks Mudkipz
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Somewhere beautiful.
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What if a story was to suddenly open with body parts and blood flying everywhere in the heat of a battle? People being disoriented and confused, scrambling to fight back and by the time they surround the enemy, the person reflects on how he knew today would be a bad day on how his morning started? Then to go into detail and explain the "World" and characters, to suddenly jump back into the heat of the battle as he finishes, and continue on with the story from where it left off.
Would this be a satisfying intro? Or "just no"? Question: Is one person talking about his daily morning boring as while he's doing that explaining everything to the reader? Er, should I go about explaining the "back story" (World/Characters) a different way? Or is this acceptable even though we've seen it a few times in anime's .
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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You would need to give it a cliffhanger ending, then jump into the past. Examples would be, 'Then the enemy jumps in front of mi and pointed his gun in my face...' Then do a flash back. :3 Question's Answer : What other ways are there to explain it? o.o |
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