[Duratrix]

Potw #6 voting thread
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This weeks theme: Freestyle

Voting rules:
You can only vote on one entry.
Voting for yourself is not allowed. Doing so will result in you being Disqualified.

Explaining your votes is much appreciated!!

Voting will end Sunday ... 25/4/2010

ENTRIES:

Entry 01 - RAMj00:

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Men in boxes

Eternally grateful
for your actions
fancies of yours
strike fear at the hearts
of men in lines

Going by ship
to death in boxes
Posted by mail
obscurely read in monotone
is nothing more than a label
Or another shaved head in the pile

Retaliate and scream
Lungs drenched in the smoke
dripping down
corroding the soul
beyond the cracks
surfacing in the mirror
The light bulb flickers

Ash in the eye
white and deep
sloth walk forwards
grip walls and falls
in mass of men
streaked red
boxed and sent

Entry 02 - WsE:

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I am a moderator of this forum
Moderating is my life, and banning my lulz
I have banned over a thousand advertising pricks

Seen many lacking introductions
And just as many fags

Have withstood whine to ban many trolls
Yet there'll always be more

So as I fap,
Unlimited Moderator Works

Entry 03 - Geo69:

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A carved cross
An empty coffin
Tears flow pointlessly
Frozen hearts
Blank stares
When will they know
The lie of their voices
Echoes in Heaven.

Crawl back to the shadows
Sleep deep in the ground
Oh, forgotten one
Your time has ended
Eternally alone
Goodbyes were said
A dream has withered

A waste of time
An endless circle
Binded we are
Crucified to a dream
Sorrow consumes us
Death has taken us
Remember me forever
Or I am condemned.

Entry 04 - The Ghost:

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Madness Madness

Madness madness all around
Madness madness as I stalk you round
Madness madness observe my work
Madness madness as I go berserk
Madness madness feel that gash
Madness madness your head I shall smash
Madness madness consumes my soul
Madness madness takes its toll

Entry 05 - Yellow:

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Days and Days

I don't think, how they think
I don't see what they see
Yet I want to fit in
So I follow their Lead
While day by day
My heart's eaten away

They hate what I love
What they love I do hate
Yet I want to fit in
But I hate that I'm fake
While Day by Day
My hearts eaten away

They believe what I don't
I'm not feeling so proud
Yet I decieve till the end
So I can fit with the crowd
While day by day
my hearts eaten away

That's it I can't take it
my world is unsteady
With these Lies, deceits, and doubts
This mask is now Heavy

I try to remove it
but now something is wrong
After all these Days and days and days
my hearts finally Gone...

[evereternal7]

WsE's is most memorable

well done to all

[samohtdarklight]

Entry 4, I can relate.

[dukehiruma]

entry 2.. for the awesomeness

[klaynne14]

entry 2, for it's epicness

[arif_sama]

Entry...2
goes all the way!!

[FenRirFX]

Vote 4 WsE that gurl is funny.

[Avamo]

#5. totally stood out from the others for me. well done !!!!!!!!!

[spectlze]

what more can i say #2 takes the cake

[Duratrix]

Originally Posted by klaynne14

entry 2, for it's epicness

^That and also cuz I'm a mod myself.


Congratz on your victory WsE!!
Mind giving me the theme for the next potw? Or should I just make it freestyle?