[Duratrix]

Potw #3 voting thread
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This weeks theme: Pathetic Fallacy or Comedy Anime

Voting rules:
You can only vote on one entry.
Voting for yourself is not allowed. Doing so will result in you being Disqualified.

Explaining your votes is much appreciated!!

Voting will end Sunday (?)

ENTRIES:

Entry 01 - Avamo:

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Her beauty is something i cannot compare,
to me whose fate is to stay in despair
I see her everyday but cannot find words,
to tell her i stay here,beneath her petals

the fate of a thorn is to live being hated,
yet i take pride in being her protector,
i vow to keep her beauty safe,
from hands who wish to destroy her grace

But today something happened, something i dreaded
its the fate of flowers , their payment for beauty,
their life is short,far shorter than mine
i saw her being broken, her beauty being scattered

enduring this pain is the life of a thorn,
to see the flowers bloom is our happiness,
this long life might be a curse for our brethren,
since our loved ones die and we are to witness.

Entry 02 - Shrapnel:

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Shaken up by the wind I wake up
with overwhelming terror and anxiety
waiting to leave the nest eventually
away from my mother when it comes
when we'll know the summer is over.

I keep assuring myself I'm ready
but deep down I'm not quite prepared
yet, for long and terrifying nightmare
I have to come face to face with
being torn apart from my family.

While I come to accept this truth
as the time goes on, the wind becomes
a lot stronger than the one I remember
maybe there's something I can do
to keep the wind at bay if I should.

This way I can overturn the fate
where I will possibly see the spring
coming in time to see the sun rising
instead of being dragged in a rain
and buried alive by the snowflakes.

[Retrorock]

Lol only two entries. I vote for Avamo's

[iguana8]

Me too...i vote for avamo's

[cotsiost]

i vote for avamo's, really nice good one, will be looking forward to seeing your next piece of work, hope it will get better

[Avamo]

hasn't closed yet right? i vote for shrapnels poem, nicely written and good personification. well done keep it up!

[Duratrix]

Congratulations Avamo on winning this!!

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