[Duratrix]

POTW #3
Theme: Pathetic Fallacy or Comedy Anime

Note: Articulate the thoughts and emotions of an inanimate object.

Length: No limit, but don't make it to long.
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Deadline: Ends on Sunday.

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[Avamo]

Her beauty is something i cannot compare,
to me whose fate is to stay in despair
I see her everyday but cannot find words,
to tell her i stay here,beneath her petals

the fate of a thorn is to live being hated,
yet i take pride in being her protector,
i vow to keep her beauty safe,
from hands who wish to destroy her grace

But today something happened, something i dreaded
its the fate of flowers , their payment for beauty,
their life is short,far shorter than mine
i saw her being broken, her beauty being scattered

enduring this pain is the life of a thorn,
to see the flowers bloom is our happiness,
this long life might be a curse for our brethren,
since our loved ones die and we are to witness.

[Shrapnel]

I can enter it right?

Shaken up by the wind I wake up
with overwhelming terror and anxiety
waiting to leave the nest eventually
away from my mother when it comes
when we'll know the summer is over.

I keep assuring myself I'm ready
but deep down I'm not quite prepared
yet, for long and terrifying nightmare
I have to come face to face with
being torn apart from my family.

While I come to accept this truth
as the time goes on, the wind becomes
a lot stronger than the one I remember
maybe there's something I can do
to keep the wind at bay if I should.

This way I can overturn the fate
where I will possibly see the spring
coming in time to see the sun rising
instead of being dragged in a rain
and buried alive by the snowflakes.