[Duratrix]

POTW #2
Theme: Negative Emotions
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Note: Negative emotions -> apathy, grief, fear, hatred, shame, blame, regret, resentment, anger, hostility, ...

Length: No limit, but don't make it to long.
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[Avamo]

This nightmare of hatred,
this never ending darkness,
relays to me,
a message of sadness

i see before me,
the dawn of a day,
when man turns on man,
and their spirits decay

this scene of great sorrow,
displays no tomorrow,
says a ghost to me,
the ghost of humanity.

[Purple]

That depressed feeling of melancholy descends upon me.
I gaze upon the velvet rose which I see
In an allegorical sense it depicts my life.
Oh, the many ways it portrays my strife.

The beautiful petals, that alluring red.
like, in today's dystopia, the innumerous blood shed
every minute, hour and day though hidden
the secrets of the world; forbidden.

The sweet scent, equivalent to that dreamland.
that distant, allusive, unapproachable, unobtainable land.
I envy it, loathe it, hate it, from the bottom of my heart.
Just like life itself; tearing me apart

Finally the thorns, the source of agony,
pain, suffering, torture, woe and misery.
That fills my life.

Survival of the fittest, the weak are devoured.
Killed to become food for those empowered.
It's time for my departure, my fate draws nigh.
To be slaughtered; for a mere animal am I.

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Well, that's my entry.
It's pretty crap but I guess I'm only 14
Not as good as my other poems but it'll do

[Risuzu]

How far do we go back?
When did out time begin?
We didn't know how to sin,
But we did know how to grin.
How much did we truly lack?

I know how we have drifted;
Sailed onto this open sea.
We set sail with such glee,
And we let ourseleves go free.
But it has all been destoyed.

We sail on a sea of blood;
Sailing on the essence of life.
It drains so slowly off a knife;
I see it from the growing strife.
The mainland will see a flood.

We sailed together for days,
Those days became so long.
I grew tired of your song,
And your yearning for one who is brawn.
I suppose such yearning never pays.

His blood flowed so, as if his body full.
I watched as it coated the floor,
I watched as it reached the door,
And I watched as I made him only gore.
Your blood is so much more beautiful.

So how did this truly begin?
It came when we entered the sea of love,
And it ended when we entered into strife.
With the epilogue in blood being drawn;
Truly, I find your head by itself wonderful...

[Duratrix]

Here's my entry. ^^


I hated you for being so good.
Couldn't resist the hunger.
Now my hands are full of your blood.

I hated myself for not holding back.
Even without much anger,
your body suddenly said 'crack'.

I hated the world,
for making you so tender.
How could I not withhold?

And now you're gone...
But I'll keep you inside of me,
My dear sandwich I ate at dawn.

[TsubasaKai]

An emotion
Flickers across a familiar face
I disconnect
So I won’t have to feel their pain
A moment
As they tell me about the break up
It’s stupid
I’m thinking already of going home
A pause
As they wait for my response
“So what”
Is my only reply to their strife
I leave
Because it’s not my place to say
I think
Everyone should make their own mistakes
At night
I sit alone thinking to myself
How perfect
This solitude I built around me
No one
Seems to penetrate the walls I build
I reflect
With two words I secure my loneliness
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This was what I came up with after considering "negative emotions". Apathy/Self inflicted solitude.......I guess it will do...I hope.