[Duratrix]

POTW #1
Theme: Freestyle
And the first poetry competition has begun. ^^

Note: Anything is allowed.

Length: No limit, but don't make it to long.
Your entry: You can only have one entry. Entries can be changed by editing your post.
Your latest entry will be used.
Premade: Any poems you made in the past, may NOT be used. (premade = more then 1 week old)
Plagiarism: The use of other peoples work without mentioning the source is strictly forbidden and even illegal!!!
Posting: You can post it as a text document or text directly in the post.
Language: Do not use bad language! Keep it clean.

Deadline: Ends on Sunday (20 december 2009)

Prizes:
1. Choose the next potw theme. (2 themes, because it's the first)
2. Will be placed in the Potw hall of fame. (+ ....)

Voting will be different than that of the sotw.

No discussions in this thread.
For discussions go here: Poetry of the week - discussion (?)
Follow these rules and have fun!!

[Risuzu]

This place is forever the same
And it is a place without blame.
I am here for a special reason
To visit only in this season.
I come to look for a certain name.

I find her much the same as before
Between us there is much lore.
I kneel down and look upon her.
I start to speak to my lover,
But words fail me at my core.

So I start to weep there,
As around my face falls my hair.
She offers no comfort to me,
While before she would with glee.
The wind blows in this nightmare.

I stand up and look back to that spot
And I remember so clearly the shot.
She was taken away from me for good;
Her bones no longer looking how they should.
So I leave her tombstone, my love for naught.

[Avamo]

the darkness whispers to me,
dear boy, what do you see
i answer back ,sadness etched in my face
death dear dark, death of my grace

Tis something i cannot avoid
Tis the truth of the world,
Death befalls all,be they young or old
Death comes at once,without a reason at all

Were you careful or not is something
you should not be debating when thee
are resting in the depths of the earth
says this sadly my spirit to me.

[ecchilover]

Love teaches us to love our selves
To teach others to love themselves
And teach those around us to love themselves and others

Love gives of itself,
Love sacrifices,
Love extends beyond boundaries
Love destroys fear and create a badge of courage

[Duratrix]

1... 2... 3...
I'm writing a poem can't you see?
4... 5... 6...
Getting all these numbers in the mix.
7... 8...
I'm almost done, just you wait.
9... 10...
There, I'm done.
Now are you gonna read it again?