[Foresyphe Sinly]

Life,a time when everything blooms and cherish what nature had given us.But what the most pleasure in life?To some it's love while to other it's life itself.But to me it's making the impossible become possible.When a certain things that other say's it's impossible now that's the fun part of life.When we known what possible we use to give only 110% but to do what impossible we give 120% and that the best part of life.

[cotsiost]

nice one, it reminded me of TTGL:
"do the impossible touch the untouchable, row row fight the powah"

[Avamo]

Cool very nice.

[RinVonStark]

Too much repetition and poorly written.
The "other" Sinly is way more proficient than you.

[WsE]

I'm normally not a grammar-nazi, but you could use some polishing

[ARTHURIUSS]

Err...the english involved is some what lacking but props for what you wish to convey!