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10 | 45.45% |
| Entry 02 |
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12 | 54.55% |
| Voters: 22. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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the slovenly woman of AT.
Join Date: Sep 2009
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Yea wouldn't work unless I was hanging by my neck with hooks slowly being weighed down with sharks attached to my feet. Rin does things the way he wants to do them- I do them the way I want to do them. I can see things I can LEARN from him- but that's about it. |
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DAT ASS
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Retardville
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I voted forTally. I liked the atmosphere she was able to create and the tension is retained throughout the story!
Rin's though well written felt like I was not privy to the beginning nor the end.Understandable, considering it was the 3rd chapter of his novel.I also felt there was an overload of info. for what is supposed to be a short story. Now all this is meant to be constructive criticism.Don't come to me bitching about it! and Rin make sure you send me a copy when u finish ur novel!
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Tremble!
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Department of Redundancy Department
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Sure =P If I get around deciding if I should or should not kill Elian's romantic interest for uneeded dramah... Afff, getting to attached to the characters -.-
And yeah, since the entry isn't exactly a short story, it doesn't fit. Thanks for the criticism =D |
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