SSOTM #2 Voting Thread - Page 3

TTally · 10-15-2009, 10:10 PM

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Originally Posted by RinVonStark

Also, to douse your expectations: I doubt a duo text would work cause I'm really freaking bossy and Tally doesn't seem to be the type who, let's put it bluntly, kneels and sucks up (no flame intended).

*clears throat* *kneels down* *puckers up* *faces the camera* *give it the finger* *stands up and walks away*

Yea wouldn't work unless I was hanging by my neck with hooks slowly being weighed down with sharks attached to my feet. Rin does things the way he wants to do them- I do them the way I want to do them. I can see things I can LEARN from him- but that's about it.

RinVonStark · 10-15-2009, 10:22 PM

Much like what this filthy Narutard said. I wonder what Tally thinks about it, though >.<

EDIT: GIIIGAAA DOOORIRUUU BUUUREEEEEEEKAAAAAA!!! 900

TTally · 10-16-2009, 12:22 AM

....About what now? I got lost.

Darkchao45 · 10-16-2009, 12:50 AM

*looks at poll*
I wonder who will win though.......

ARTHURIUSS · 10-20-2009, 09:57 PM

I voted forTally. I liked the atmosphere she was able to create and the tension is retained throughout the story!

Rin's though well written felt like I was not privy to the beginning nor the end.Understandable, considering it was the 3rd chapter of his novel.I also felt there was an overload of info. for what is supposed to be a short story.

Now all this is meant to be constructive criticism.Don't come to me bitching about it! and Rin make sure you send me a copy when u finish ur novel!

RinVonStark · 10-22-2009, 11:16 AM

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Originally Posted by ARTHURIUSS

Rin make sure you send me a copy when u finish ur novel!

Sure =P If I get around deciding if I should or should not kill Elian's romantic interest for uneeded dramah... Afff, getting to attached to the characters -.-
And yeah, since the entry isn't exactly a short story, it doesn't fit. Thanks for the criticism =D

Geo69 · 10-22-2009, 11:28 AM

ill vote for Rin. deeper story more complicated, leaves questions and makes you wonder about the characters. also dialogue is a plus

Nygus · 10-29-2009, 07:24 PM

I voted for...........uhmm... I cant remember but I did vote

neferetiti11 · 10-29-2009, 09:09 PM

Rvs

TTally · 10-30-2009, 08:22 AM

FINALLY- More than one difference!

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Entry 01	10	45.45%
Entry 02	12	54.55%
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RinVonStark Tremble! Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Department of Redundancy Department	10-15-2009, 10:22 PM Much like what this filthy Narutard said. I wonder what Tally thinks about it, though >.< EDIT: GIIIGAAA DOOORIRUUU BUUUREEEEEEEKAAAAAA!!! 900

TTally the slovenly woman of AT. Join Date: Sep 2009	10-16-2009, 12:22 AM ....About what now? I got lost.

Nygus State Alchemist Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: where the equator crosses	10-29-2009, 07:24 PM I voted for...........uhmm... I cant remember but I did vote incantations....flirtations....perhaps vibrations to follow?

neferetiti11 Narutard Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Turkey	10-29-2009, 09:09 PM Rvs [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] ( Click to show/hide ) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

TTally the slovenly woman of AT. Join Date: Sep 2009	10-30-2009, 08:22 AM FINALLY- More than one difference!