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Default Jovi LaCroix Bordeaux Poem Thread :) - 05-19-2012, 12:35 PM

"The Joyful Enthusiasm"

Distinction of may nightmares occur
This dreams of yours are my exuberance
You gave meaning to this technicolor appearance
As well my love to you resonated.

Everytime you are near to me
I see psychedelic parade of lovebirds
Everything elses blurred
Felt like that my heart was secured.

I can finally see the end of the horizon
you extinguish all my pain without a reason
furthermore lavishly demeanour
As all but anything else, my sadness cure.


"LOKI"

"A star is fall as a love and kind
My eyes are hurt staring,
at full blind sky
Unlucky to fall, my doubts beguilt
Unlucky to fall, my fear is bliss

As the time running on my corner
Thy stars form a light of banner
Thy drastically approach my frozen heart
Thy covered the shadowed scar of,traces hatred, pain and sorrow

These tiny dots of light in the sky
Harmonized a fancy and gentle music
Though, I am deaf, couldn't feel the joy
I faint with smile, hearing The echoing voices of a choire

Soon. The night ends with dawn
Dreaming of a star that,He could never owned.
Better soon, he stand on his spot
Determining his promise for thy star,to wait until, all black vanishes to white."

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Default 05-19-2012, 02:08 PM

"I wrote this poem for a girl, I once love before, and her name is... RAPUNZELL"


"Rapunzell"

She admire this girl with a brown hair
He dreamt of her but all he got is nightmare
As he gaze upon thee
Desire to make her as his fiancee

Inspired by her fairy tale name
Sudden decisions unfurled came
Unbeknownst to her
He already love that girl.

He called her as his grandma
He never thought he'll get hit by this good karma
Now, the bliss echoing on his ears
As his heart sense the rejection's, fear.

He sees the sky, so velvet
Stars portrayed her face
Water vividly reflects her calmness
Most especially, her eloquence of kindness.


you will always be my inspiration

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Default 05-20-2012, 04:16 AM

What is your first language?


"There are people who make a life's work of tricking others... but just because something is convincing, that does not make it true. It is merely convincing."
- Karl Schroeder, Ventus
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Default 05-20-2012, 04:35 AM

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What is your first language?
I am from philippines, my first language is filipino/tagalog..


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Default 05-20-2012, 04:41 AM

"This one is a poem requested by some friend, she want a poem for her best friend, and give it to his Graduation Day.."

"Best Friend"

When everthing turns to be astray
A friend is there who'll never betray
He'll offer you help and strength to pray
And gives color of rainbow, when your world is grey.

When your thoughts are obscure
A friend is there who'll listen so pure
He'll laugh at you, but He'll give you cure
Because a true friend never stinks like manure.

When your feelings are seem to lost
A friend is there who'll kick you like a boss
He'll stretch your cheek and tell you you're gross
But in the end, He'll compare your beauty to a rose.

When everything turned to be unhappy
I remember you're always there to make me crazy
I laugh and smile the way I never could
And realize that I found a one good true friend.

You gave me the Color of rainbow
Made remedy and cure to my sadness
Make me feel that I am beauty such a rose
And complete my life knowing you, that you're my best friend.


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Default 05-22-2012, 04:34 AM

"I wrote this one for a girl who is my inspiration, she inspires me to create many poems I couldn't believe I can write... indeed, I am deeply and truely in love with her, I set her free and didn't pursue for a chance to love her dearly... even she has her boyfriend now, I'll always be here for her..."


"Michelle Gaile Lianne"

(M)y hearts' beat fast whenever you are near
(I) jailed this heart within my promise for you dear
(C)andidly, I always think of you each day
(H)ence, I hope this feeling won't be stray
(E)very corner of this heart is painted by your name
(L)oving you from afar, triggers a little pain
(L)avish desire of hopes and dreams
(E)loquently wished to stay by your side at the fields of greens.

(G)azing upon these fancy rhymes
(A)llow me to shorten this poem's surprise
(I) created this art because you're my inspiration
(L)ianne, Sorry for making you trapped within my imaginations
(E)very poem I make... most of it is sole for you...

(L)ife is art, and art is life
(I) created my very art because of you
(A)flutters a new dreams for me to strive
(N)ostalgic, reminiscing every moment you are with me
(N)ot a chance to tell what I feel for you thus,
(E)very art I made is not a poem, but a letter which my hearts' compose.


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Default 06-05-2012, 04:08 PM

"FABLE OF US"

I wrote this poem
when I get lonely at home,
when I think of words
expressing something I feel
should I picture someone?
or should write something for no one?

Maybe this isn't real
Daydreaming about us, is so surreal
My existence won't never reveal
Without you, this world will be unreal

Changing this fable we live in
Even prayers won't help me from my sin
A trials of betrayal?
Hopes begun to fade

Now that I lost my will
Rush in a battle I got killed
I never gave up
but pain is sustaining up
I'll take this one last chance,
'Cause if not?it'll be choosing
from I'll die regretting
or live forgetting...

still, I'll keep this poem to be unfinished
because the tale of us need some furnished
I'll do anything for a smile,
Holding you until our time is done
Because we both know the day will come.


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Default 07-04-2012, 05:06 PM

"STRANGER"

Stars form a banner in the sky
Tenaciously gave up the feeling to fly
Reminiscing the nostalgic feeling with someone
Anguish pain she hid, and try to live for no one
Nothing's left in her view of blissful sight
Guided by darkness keep her away from light
Existence of her dropped into the bottom of Abyss
Remnants and debris of her heart wandered amiss
She become a stranger, a lost of fist


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Default 08-04-2012, 10:14 AM

*Another request from a friend, for his girlfriend

"JENNY"

[J]ust a moment that I catch My breathe
These eyes of mine have fallen into Your wreath
Staying by Your side, removes all My discomfort
You held My hand tight, and you tell I am worth.


[E]very part of this heart is already entangled
All the luxuries from heaven, a Demigod landed
You had reach my deepest thoughts and take roots
collected my heart's debris treasured like a valued loots.


[N]othing can compare in this world to You
This unconditional love, You gave so true
Caress that seizes every tiny part of me
Fabricated this damn-dark-world with colors I possible see.


[N]ever doubt this words I spoken
This is not a poem, but My love as written
You gave the world to me without unknowing
And all I know that this love and amity You offered,is worth dying.

[Y]et, there's no perfect word to say what I feel
And I am lucky that my Daydream is real
Daydreaming about true love and affection
The reality of You and I, in our own dimension.


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Default 08-16-2012, 10:08 AM

"I wrote this one in World Teacher's Day
I gave cards(which I made personally) to all the teachers in our school"
I love them Golden Seeds Guidance Montessori School-GSGMS

"I SALUTE A TEACHER"


I salute a teacher
For being the hard working one
I salute a teacher
Who never stop to teach when the lesson is undone
Lessons in life nor Lessons in school
I salute a teacher
For helping us student to have a better Future..

I salute a teacher
For being a good listener
I salute a teacher
For being our good partner
Partner in life trials nor school competitions
I salute a teacher
For giving us strenght to win, in all conditions.


I salute a teacher
For correcting our wrong attitudes
I salute a teacher
For erasing all the feelings of solitude
Even some of us student parents are afar
I salute a teacher
For being our second parents and our guiding star


I salute a teacher
For giving us infinite motivation
I salute a teacher
For reminding us to stay away from bad addiction
They are all a trustworthy person
I salute a teacher
For loving us student whole-heartedly, even without a reason.

A love of a teacher is irreplaceable
A kindness of a teacher is incomparable
A passion of a teacher to teach is unbelievable
Keep in mind that all the teachers in GSGMS are lovable
Thus, We all salute for the Greatness of our Teacher


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Default 10-11-2012, 10:43 PM

"DESERTED"

This is too much too to bear
I feel so numb, I could barely stare
This torment I claim to dare
Skies so darken, I'm drowned to this nightmare.

This mix emotions into this deep confusion
Now I'm blind, couldn't find my direction
All is lost even my broken devotion
Even it's debris of memories fades into hallucination.

Those joyous memories always linger in my ears
Those wasted moments, wasted just like these tears
Screaming without voices, a prayer you might hear
Even if you leave, I'll keep waiting to you my dear.

Seize the day thou Devils may conquered
The Labyrinth of my heart falls to pieces I heard
Every time I reminisce, there's this pain always occured
Because I stake acclaim of Anger, and 'tis I got what I Deserve...


"ANGER"


A sudden pause in my breathe
when I feel this melancholy.
These fists couldn't stop ruining this wreath
proof that my consciousness turn into madly.

This dire sentiment for desire dimmed
When anger can incinerate ones virtue.
The altruism of my soul and hopes trimmed
seeing endings of my dreams I had tried to pursue.

The consequences of your mistake
solely devoured in madness mentally.
Now every word you would say I'll take
even a requiem is recited, I couldn't listen dearly.

Don't let me fall to this pit of madness my dear
Please reach for my hand, I am now in fear.
Don't let this anger consume my heart and tear
"I Love You So Much", and that's I wanna hear.


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Default 01-05-2013, 02:28 PM

"FRIEND"

I dream about a fairy tale

Where you will see the velvet sky is so fair

Monstrous creatures hiding into there lair

You will see giants, mermaids and an enormous appetite bear

The calmness, love and peace is everywhere

And all your hopes and goals are never ensnare

Why this dream became a "So Dear"?

Because "Friend", beside me you are "there".

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Default 01-12-2013, 11:31 AM

As I lay down to my bed

I start thinking how many words I couldn't said

I keep holding, holding til there's no hand to hold mine

I keep Hiding, hiding til there's no place for me to stay behind

I know I am a fool to take a lone voyage

Trapped inside this labyrinth full of your collage

I traveled all wilderness

Just to find a piece of fondness

This love I kept is very complicated

Unbeknownst to you, you have my heart confiscated

I rather take this pain and die with asphyxia

Than to forget your existence and claim for amnesia

My dear, hope one day you'll notice me

I am always right here but your eyes can't see

Even If I thorn apart for this love for thee

I'll be here waiting like a child counting one-two-three.


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Default 01-16-2013, 03:22 PM

I was wondering outside
Thinking how true love's abide
Feeling the cold breeze of the night
Standing alone, I wish I was right.

Hearing a sad music from a minstrel
Quickly reminisce all your facade and myrrh
Behind the silhouette of clouds from these sky
Questions like... "Did I already unchain myself to fly"?.

All this rebellion is to make you realize
You got a man on your front so don't fantasize
I won't allow my heart hear your words disguise
Just please be contented or else,it's time for goodbyes.


you will always be my inspiration

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Default 01-16-2013, 04:31 PM

maybe my poems are bad
so there isn't anyone who leaves comment...


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Default 01-23-2013, 09:50 AM

It's not because it's bad but there are less individuals who have the time and courtesy to comment. Just keep posting your poems and build your reader base.

"Just please be contented or else, time for us to exchange goodbyes. "

suggestion - "Just please be contented or else it's time for goodbyes. "

Maybe just to shorten it but of course this is just a suggestion. Well I will try to read more of your works and thank you for sharing it.


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Default 01-26-2013, 03:20 PM

Thank you Sid Greene for your kind words.. I must realize it first.
You simple put a smile on my face now TeeHee,
your suggestion is good, I'll put it right away

here's a sonnet I made yesterday

dunno what good title for it right now
can you help me give one? Tnx in advance.

On a starry-filled night
I dare to wonder
Holding this fiery light
I take might to step further
Amidst from this darken room
Is an ambry of her subtle tears
I saw her eyes drown in gloom
My heart insist to remove her fears
We find an escape behind these foliage
Beast haunts and pursue us by her myrrh
I sheathed my sword and avoids carnage
And put my life on the line for this girl
Finally, we saw the sun shining on vivid skies
Allured by her angelic facade, and got a kiss after she cries


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Default 01-28-2013, 12:08 PM

Thy eyes beholding a distant shore
So unfair, we can't be together anymore
O'r mystic love divided into seven seas
like a lumberjack banned to cut some trees
Hold your tears for I will find every drop
Even finding them from the ocean I won't stop
Wait for me and be brave my Dear,
I'll find a way to hold you near.
I'll prove to you that my words are full devotion
wake you up from nightmares and mental fiction
God would hear me for I pray night and day
Just hold onto our hope and don't dismay
Only a little too soon I'll be with thy grace
I'll sunk a thousand ships for your unlimited embrace
I won't give up on you yet.


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Default 02-02-2013, 05:54 PM

I close my eyes and
think of thee

Gently touch my face feeling tears
falling down

Slowly breathing,
impaled with agony

Hold grips through my chest
as my heart drown to melancholy

I begun to freeze
as cold embraces me

To hallowed grounds,
I stand my mind falsity

Even my own shadow
leaves his own body

I am just a no one
wishing for amity

If you compare me to things,
I'll be no rarity

I am just a person you can
always erase its entity

Thu art my heart and soul
leaves no privacy

For thy I am true, so please
let me be.


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Default 03-10-2013, 06:05 AM

"Painter's Masterpiece"

There is a painter with his white canvass
Who sets adventure together with his compass
Many he met is so subtle
And some other seem a bit brutal.
He explore many places to find an inspiration
Learned many things and improved his imagination
As he deeply stares to the velvet skies
Wondering where his imagination would flies
He then paint the canvass with a smile on his face
Every colors and hues he put makes his eyes amazed
His heart won't stop racing until it's finish
Then he made the final touch and the final furnish
A masterpiece made by his experiences and bare hands
Painted eloquently with a dazzling passion just like he planned.

The Painter in this poem represents our "Teachers"
And the white canvass is "Us" their students
They paint us with goals, hopes, knowledge and other amazing things
They make us their masterpiece to reach even our impossible dreams
They shape our personality for our own good being
They love us like we're their own children
Even "Life" has many struggles and trials like other people say
We have our "Teachers" who'll guide and help us along its way.


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