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Default 09-22-2009, 04:56 AM

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Oh look, I'm in the credits.

And this may seem like flaming to you, but if a person has issues with "forced" descriptions, then they just need to experience those descriptions themselves more.
Do you read what you write? I really doubt it o.o
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Default 09-22-2009, 05:10 AM

Example of what I meant, rin:

Describe a tropical paradise. How well could you describe one sitting where you are?
Now... let's say you actually were on a tropical island. Describe it now.

See the difference and/or my point?

This principle applies to describing a relationship... which you said you have difficulties describing. If a person has spent a great deal of time socializing with the opposite sex and being in relationships... then, not surprisingly, describing relationships would be an easier duty to partake.

Also, I don't have any kids. It's not by coincidence I'm not good at describing a father/son relationship. But ask a person that is a proud parent what it's like, and they'll fill you with a wealth of knowledge on the topic.

.. and here I am, once again, elaborating for you, in spite of claiming I wasn't going to do this any more. Maybe some of your hypocrisy is rubbing off on me...


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Default 09-22-2009, 05:21 AM

Hehe =D I did it again.
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Default 09-22-2009, 05:23 AM

Everyone needs to set goals for themselves.

And I was trying to help you rin. You clearly haven't socialized with women enough, and are now paying for it by not knowing how to write about them.


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Default 09-22-2009, 05:26 AM

Yup, that must be it =D Care explaining that again? I didn't get it the first time =3
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Default 09-22-2009, 05:41 AM

What loser spams their own thread, by the way? Especially when they criticize others to such a degree for doing the same thing... *cough*hypocrite...


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Default 09-22-2009, 05:54 AM

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What loser spams their own thread, by the way? Especially when they criticize others to such a degree for doing the same thing... *cough*hypocrite...
I wonder what losers does that too. And yeah, he sure is a hypocrite who never looks at what he does and thinks everyone else had a childhood like his or a lack of any kind of relationships at the age of 25+ because the only thing he can hope to achieve is starting an azn massacre, but he knows his won't be as cool as the VTech one so he doesn't even try... oh wait =D
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Default 09-22-2009, 05:54 AM

lol cadet!

Rin- i happen to be female. Don't talk to this old man- talk to a lady like me more and your writing will flower.
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lol cadet!

Rin- i happen to be female. Don't talk to this old man- talk to a lady like me more and your writing will flower.
Read your intro so I know but what I mean by character relationships isn't that. But space boyo has a one track mind so it's pretty useless to explain it to him. Ah well.

EDIT: And I think you mean "florish", right?

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Default 09-22-2009, 05:58 AM

Don't listen to this... "Taly" person, Rin. Who knows who she really is. I was the one that inspired you by bestowing upon you that song. Don't forget.

I make it happen.


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