[TheChaos0]

Wrote it on a spur of the moment, just now. Don't even have a title for it yet.

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It goes on and on, to what effect, I do not know
It's just a remnant of your dreams but I can feel
Emotion, forgotten to myself and that certain magical feeling
Yet I know not how to stretch my hand and reach
So it just goes on and on, that pointless game of hide 'n' seek

Whirling, whirling like I lost my calling, what direction shall I go?
West or East or perhaps I'll face the Beast
What is right and what is wrong, it matters not
But I know I have to leave and find that what I have lost
So I'll just whirl and whirl in the direction that the wind blows

I do not know, I simply don't, who do I chase?
Maybe it's you or maybe it's simply me, whom I disgraced
Stepping up and down, through forests and the lakes
Realising that maybe it's not the end that matters but the journey?
So I still don't know, oh no, who will return?

To believe is all I can do, to believe in me or you
Together or apart, only time can decide which will be right
Two souls, two gems, two never ending flows of life
Two desires and only one that shall be true
So I'll just believe that I'll see my way through

Yet I'm falling, falling down past the point of return
Higher, so much higher you are now than me, one who could not atone
And that smile is fading, fading fast from the face of the forlorn
As it should, as it must be, as it shall be, as I willed it be
For I am just a fallen, your fallen knight of the Moon

[Shadow Tearz]

i feel alot of sadness when i read it...

very good work chaos...

[Sid Greene]

You have a good talent in making poems in the spur of the moment TheChaos0. It's kind a sad but a good poem about feelings of desperation and hope. Thank you for sharing.

[TheChaos0]

Originally Posted by Sid Greene

You have a good talent in making poems in the spur of the moment TheChaos0. It's kind a sad but a good poem about feelings of desperation and hope. Thank you for sharing.

Most of the stuff I write comes up randomly even more stuff comes up randomly at inappropriate times when I cannot pen it down. Oh well, what can one do?

[flower fox]

I really enjoyed this poem. It had a lot of feeling in it, and even though sometimes you didn't exactly come out and say what you were talking about it left a lot of imagining for the reader. I like that.

My favorite line was, "So I'll just whirl and whirl in the direction that the wind blows" because the second that I read that I could just imagine it

Keep up the good work!

[Asmi]

I'm gonna be stealing some of the lines in your poem. Good job. :]

[TheChaos0]

Originally Posted by Asmi

I'm gonna be stealing some of the lines in your poem. Good job. :]

Thanks.