Shorts

TheChaos0 · **Shorts -** 03-02-2011, 02:17 PM

I found these on half torn piece of paper while looking for something in my documents drawer.

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Me, of sentimental value
You, of passion in your heart
Us, of endless love
And them, of happiness that's given

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The casual breeze that hits my face
Can only move my hair by an inch
But you my, my love
Can knock me down by a mere whisper

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Am I a poet?
No I'm not!
I'm just a man
A man with his head
High above the clouds

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Ah, I hate the time
It moves too quickly
Or too slowly
And never just about right

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The emptiness I feel
Overwhelms me at times
The gaping hole in my heart
Screams a thousand cries
To fill this void, I can't myself
But have to wait for destiny to do it's part

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Paper's nothing but a medium for thought
Fragile as the mind itself
Yet still we waste the ink
On this fool's errand
To preserve the foolish words of our hearts

Asmi · 03-02-2011, 03:32 PM

Niiice.

Sid Greene · **Look for more -** 03-07-2011, 05:23 AM

I will help you look for more in your drawer 'coz I like this one. Its straight and sweet as a poem. Great job and I want to read more of your works.

Call me the next time you're looking again inside your drawer and maybe there's more from where this treasure came from hidden away.

aimiko63 · 03-12-2011, 04:43 PM

wow that's nice

Elusive Mind · 03-12-2011, 06:43 PM

These are great. The fact that you found something as creative as this laying around in your drawer really surprises me. Something like this should not be laying around, but hung on the wall. Can't wait to see your next poems that are fresh out of the closet.

TheChaos0 · 03-12-2011, 10:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sid Greene

I will help you look for more in your drawer 'coz I like this one. Its straight and sweet as a poem. Great job and I want to read more of your works.

Call me the next time you're looking again inside your drawer and maybe there's more from where this treasure came from hidden away.

Haha, I guess I written stuff over the years and still somewhere...I think.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elusive Mind

These are great. The fact that you found something as creative as this laying around in your drawer really surprises me. Something like this should not be laying around, but hung on the wall. Can't wait to see your next poems that are fresh out of the closet.

High praises there, thanks. I'll need to look into that drawer again.

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Asmi Lolicon Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Soul Society!	03-02-2011, 03:32 PM Niiice. Smile even through tears. Be strong even through fears.

Sid Greene Otaku Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Between worlds	Look for more - 03-07-2011, 05:23 AM I will help you look for more in your drawer 'coz I like this one. Its straight and sweet as a poem. Great job and I want to read more of your works. Call me the next time you're looking again inside your drawer and maybe there's more from where this treasure came from hidden away. [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

aimiko63 Narutard Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Philippines	03-12-2011, 04:43 PM wow that's nice

Elusive Mind Narutard Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Ithaca	03-12-2011, 06:43 PM These are great. The fact that you found something as creative as this laying around in your drawer really surprises me. Something like this should not be laying around, but hung on the wall. Can't wait to see your next poems that are fresh out of the closet. Thank Jaks for the Sig [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]