[AldNonymous]

the wall still laugh
and the air still scream a pathetic rythm
i'm stand .... grab on my mask
but its seem so useless coz i'm a clown already

painted on white
drawing tears under my eye
color full coat and the ugly hair
with willow on my ass

i'm heal the un joy thing
cheers the upset
punch bag for the anger
but are you know how deep my wounds?

when i'm sad....i'll laugh
when i'm happy i'll share
give a hug... for the careless
but are you know i need a love?

i'm a clown
a friend of all lonely soul
but when every one has a mate
i have no one to be arround

[chaotix37]

Seriously though this is what a clown's life had. Every thing has its own story to tell.

[AldNonymous]

Originally Posted by chaotix37

Seriously though this is what a clown's life had. Every thing has its own story to tell.

known as messiah complex....

[aimiko63]

aww a lonely clown thanks for sharing your poem
oh wait, i remember that clown..

[AldNonymous]

Originally Posted by aimiko63

aww a lonely clown thanks for sharing your poem
oh wait, i remember that clown..

about the picture...?

[aimiko63]

yup i guess it's the one on the 'poets' social group

[Sid Greene]

Originally Posted by AldNonymous

the wall still laugh
and the air still scream a pathetic rythm
i'm stand .... grab on my mask
but its seem so useless coz i'm a clown already

painted on white
drawing tears under my eye
color full coat and the ugly hair
with willow on my ass

i'm heal the un joy thing
cheers the upset
punch bag for the anger
but are you know how deep my wounds?

when i'm sad....i'll laugh
when i'm happy i'll share
give a hug... for the careless
but are you know i need a love?

i'm a clown
a friend of all lonely soul
but when every one has a mate
i have no one to be arround

Please this is only a suggestion for editing your poem. Its up to you to accept this or not.

the wall still laugh
and the air still scream a pathetic rhythm
I stand .... grab on my mask
but its seem so useless coz I’m a clown already

painted on deep white
drawing tears under my eye
colourful coat and the ugly hair
with willow on my ass

I heal the unhappy thing
cheers the upset
punch bag for the angry
but did you know how deep my wounds are?

when I’m sad....I’ll laugh
when I’m happy…. I’ll cry
give a hug... to the insufferable
but did you know that i need love?

I’m a clown
a friend of all lonely souls
but when everyone has a mate
I have no one to be around

I like your poem but I will be really happy if I can help you with your unique creation. Thank you. Your poem is sad but it delivers an emotion surpassing the words itself. Good work and thanks for sharing your poem.