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Exclamation Elusive Mind Works - 02-24-2011, 03:07 AM

Wake up, eat, work, and sleep
Wake up, eat, work, and sleep
A never ending repeat
Goes on and on forever
A fate I must endeavor

It's the same thing everyday
The same thing every day.
My only relief is anime,
The only way I run away.

It is never the same,
And it is never lame.
While I sit here in dismay,
And never change.

A fear in myself,
And a fear in everyone else.
There is no escape,
Only hate.
This is my unavoidable fate.

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Note, this is not the way I feel about life at the moment. It is a poem I wrote during my isolated days when I was severely depressed and I thought I would share it. Now, though, I believe that every day can be different with effort and friends.



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Default 02-24-2011, 03:41 AM

I recognize the depth of isolation in this poem, as I myself have often felt like this, even when I surround myself with my closest friends and my gaming buddies. I guess this loneliness that just keeps eating away never truly goes away, it just lessens with the help of friends.


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Default 02-24-2011, 03:27 PM

^jeah its really true
spending time with friends can rllly help alot in those kind of situations
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Default 02-24-2011, 04:26 PM

you will die alone you know...


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Default 02-24-2011, 05:07 PM

This is really true. But it seems that there was an acronym for this, S.S.D.D


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Default 02-24-2011, 05:15 PM

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you will die alone you know...
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De geso?

And back on topic.

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I guess this loneliness that just keeps eating away never truly goes away, it just lessens with the help of friends.

It never sleeps, it's just closes it's eyes.


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Default 02-24-2011, 08:10 PM

Ya know if you just change a bit of that, it's not so bad.
FRAP FRAP FRAP
AMINE ANIME ANIME
FRAP A BIT MORE
MANGA FRAP MANGA
A never ending repeat
Goes on and on forever
A fate I must endeavor


It'll turn that frown upside down :{ ":}


After 35+ years of being pestered by friends, lovers and family it's good to be alone once in awhile.


"Rectitude carried to excess hardens into stiffness; benevolence indulged beyond measure sinks into weakness."
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Default 02-24-2011, 08:19 PM

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Ya know if you just change a bit of that, it's not so bad.
FRAP FRAP FRAP
AMINE ANIME ANIME
FRAP A BIT MORE
MANGA FRAP MANGA
A never ending repeat
Goes on and on forever
A fate I must endeavor


It'll turn that frown upside down :{ ":}


After 35+ years of being pestered by friends, lovers and family it's good to be alone once in awhile.
LOL

so true...

maybe u can teach us about life...


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Default 02-24-2011, 09:20 PM

Guess everyone here feels this sometimes. Or is still feeling it.


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Default 02-24-2011, 09:49 PM

Wowie, I'm saving this. great writing.


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Smile even through tears. Be strong even through fears.
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