[Elusive Mind]

Honestly i wasn't even sure i was going to make a blog, but I'm glad i did! Sid, you were right, making it was such a great experience for me. It makes me feel as if I've become just a little more important to this world. I mean, I'd never thought that I'd ever have a blog for anything my whole life. I've just sort of accepted that I'm just another causal everyday human being who is living on through life just as everyone else. Yet creating this blog, sharing my poems to the world, all are just so meaningful to me. It helps me believe that I'm just as diverse as everyone else is. I'm really glad that I've got brought into this life and I'm really grateful to everyone who's read my poems. If it wasn't for everyone's encouragement, I've probably would have given up on poetry and would of had to continued to live on without having any self-importance in my life. Thank you all for being here and thank you for all the support.

[Sid Greene]

Originally Posted by Elusive Mind

The Non-Existent Love


A love in our world cannot exist.
Its wonders are too much of a bliss.

The satisfaction of a kiss,
The sweetness emitted from the lips,
The overwhelming happiness,

The ends of misery,
The beginnings of glee,
All are too good to be.

For when in love, I'm not in reality.
I'm not in this world even partially.

I'm sent to another humanity.
One made of affection and ardency.
A world of complete blissful harmony
Yet a world that exceeds normality.

A paradise is oft' to be its referred name.
A delusion, however, is what I proclaim.

For love in our realm sprouts only from desire.
The dire need to acquire love's majestic fire,
Reaching out for the whole fanciful entire.

Yet an everlasting love could not ever appear.
It is something that you can only see or hear,
From the many constructions of an imagineer.
The seldom couples that do, however, persevere,
Are only the ones that cease to be even here.

For when a pair reaches that state of affection
They both begin to lose reality's connection.

Once lost, they live in their own world in captivation.
Never to return 'till the end of the delusion.



Sorry for taking so long to post this. I had lost my internet for a whole week due to migration and i was unable to post anything. I also sorta took my sweet time writing this as well, so even with or without internet, it still would have been a awhile 'till I'd post this.
Either way, enjoy the poem and comment if desired. my ears (well in this case eyes) will always be wide open for your words.

No need to apologize for your poem is really worth the wait. I too have been busy and will continue to be so until the end of the month. I love these line:

For love in our realm sprouts only from desire.
The dire need to acquire love's majestic fire,
Reaching out for the whole fanciful entire.

They play in my head over and over again .

Thank you for sharing your work and I am looking forward to more.

[Elusive Mind]

Thanks Sid For your Kind words. I haven't been getting a lot of comments really (probably because I've gone for a while and still cease to be known as returned), but having at least one comment is still something I'm happy about. I'll be sure to check out your blog and comment on your poems as well, but I've been busy a lot so i can't ensure it'll be anytime soon. I'm still trying to finish reading Poeticas's recent releases.

[poeticas]

Hmm last one as i am love poems lover so tis one graspes my heart inspires me and captures making me to look back and create words in my head i love your long poems they are with soul

[Elusive Mind]

thanks poeticas. Glad to know that I've picked a topic of your liking. I usually avoid romance poems because they feel uncomfortable to write. However, after a while they're nice to make when your in the mood. Also glad i was able to inspire you. Hope your able to get some ideas from this.

[Sid Greene]

Originally Posted by Elusive Mind

Thanks Sid For your Kind words. I haven't been getting a lot of comments really (probably because I've gone for a while and still cease to be known as returned), but having at least one comment is still something I'm happy about. I'll be sure to check out your blog and comment on your poems as well, but I've been busy a lot so i can't ensure it'll be anytime soon. I'm still trying to finish reading Poeticas's recent releases.

I am too trying to finish reading poetica's work. This guy really knows how to start a thread of poems. Well just take care okay.