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Dura Made My Sig
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Houston, Texas
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05-22-2009, 02:05 AM
Well, here is my entry. there will be two posts, so... hah hah 1965 words, just do you know hah hah
PART ONE:
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By: Falsum
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The soldiers ground to a halt.
They had been trying to cross the river for days now, but the river was too wide, and the whole
river was controlled by powerful rapids. The soldiers were relieved to find a bridge, probably
the only one on the whole river.
The captain took a couple steps foward.
"Who are you? Get off the bridge, the royal Dreta Empire needs it!" The captain drew his sword,
and quickly pointed it toward the knight on the bridge. The Dreta empire is the most powerful
empire in the world. It was only a small City-State 20 years ago, but they quickly rose to power
and have begun conquering everything in their path.
"Move! Damn it!" he shouted again.
The Dreta troops looked towards the knight on the bridge. Fear and awe overtook them all. Even the
captain, who was shouting furiously, let the anger subside as he observed the figure on the bridge.
The knight wore a set of heavy armor, that covered his hole body. It had no weaknesses, no exposed
skin. The armor was jet black from age and blood that stained the entire suit, it was riddled with
scratches and cuts from years past, and the helm was cast in the shape of a demon, two great horns
coming from the foward leered out from the helm's forehead, slightly angled up. A ragged and
worn cape hung from the knight's shoulders, just as black as the armor, and reaching only the
knight's waist, it's slight swaying from the gentle wind was the only thing moving on the bridge.
The knight, stood immobile and soundlessly. His hands resting on a great black sword that was stuck
in the ground point first. The hilt of the great sword reached to the heart of the knight, and the
sword too was covered in war scars, proof of it's great life, and of the owner's experience.
"Y...You!" The captain pointed to a soldier close to him, and stuttered out orders. "I...It's
p-p-probably just a statue! Yea! So go check it out!" The unlucky soldier surprised by the sudden
nomination, and scared by the knight, slowly crept towards the knight who was as black as death.
Still, the knight stood motionless. Still, the soldier crept closer. As he got close to the knight,
the soldier saw on the bridge, a visible line drawn straight across the middle of the bridge.
The point of the knight's sword rested on this same line. When the soldier reached across this
line to touch the armor, the knight sprung to life. Immediately, and as quick as a flash, the
swung the huge sword from where it was and cut off the arm that had passed the line. Not stopping
the sword's fluid motion, the knight brought it down past the soldier, and swung back, slicing the
soldier clean in half...
The last of the slaver's dropped dead. Bringing the sword back down to him, the young man sat
amongst the bodies on the remnants of the cage he has known for the past couple of years.He was
just a slave, but now he was free. Still trapped by his pain, he gave a hoarse, tone-less cry to
the heavens.He was a young man of about 19. Tall, tanned skin, dark hair messy from neglect, and
round eyes, which were as black as death.
A few years earlier, this young man's village was raided by slavers.
The whole village in flames, the young man was the last free soul of the village. Surrounded,
his back to the burning chief's hut, a savage look in his eyes, and a bloody sword in hand, the
young man roared like a caged beast, and wildly swung his sword at the slavers. Fueled only
by anger, his energy long gone, the young man chopped down any slaver who got too close. Soon, the
butt of a spear shot threw the burning hut, and knocked the young man on the back of the head.
With one more cry of anguish and rage, the young man dropped to the ground, uncouncious, and the
leader of the slavers stepped out of the burning hut, and violently kicked the young man in the ribs.
"Take this one prisoner. Make him suffer for killing our men," The leader angrily hissed.
The young man was more than the slavers could handle, however. Violently attacking the cage he was
kept in, and trying to attack anyone that got near the cage. At night, the young man let loose
from his throat a savage howl, filled with the anguish of losing his village and family, the pain
of captivity, and his great anger for his lot in life. In an attempt to break the man, the slaver's
cut his tongue off. Without an outlet for his emotions, all the man's pain, anguish, and anger
instead channeled into his body, fueling him, till one night these emotions pushed him over the
edge.
He broke the bonds on his hands with his raw strength, and lowering his shoulder, he repeatedly
pummeled the cage until it gave out. The first slaver to reach the cage in an attempt to investigate
the noise, was torn apart by the young man's hands, his throat savagely gored by the man's teeth.
Grabbing the sword, he began to once again wildly cut down all the slavers. This time, however,
when he met the slaver's leader, he cut him down right on the spot.
As he was sitting on the remnants of his cage, a group of soldiers from the nearby city approached
the dark, blood stained young man. The captain, seeing the carnage, called his soldiers to a halt
and stepped forth.
"Did you do this?" The captain asked. "Who are you? We are soldiers from the country of Tirfi. My
name is Cassandra." Tirfi was a small country surrounded on all sides by great empires. It had only
held onto it's country through sheer bravery and courage, boldly fighting off all requests for
surrender, whether they were peaceful or less than peaceful attempts.
The young man turned his head to look at the captain. His face filled with sadness, his black eyes
glimmered in the moonlight.
"Did you do this?" Cassandra asked again. The young man nodded.
"Who are you?" Cassandra asked once again. The young man stood motionless and silent for awhile.
Then, he took his sword and scratched in the dried blood the name. Avhis. Staring at his unused
name for awhile, Avhis took a deep breath through his nose, and turned back to look at Cassandra.
After a short pause, Cassandra asked one more question.
"...Can you speak?" Cassandra ask tenatively. Avhis simply opened his mouth, and pointed at it
with his sword. Empty. No tongue. Cassandra gravely nodded her head.
"Well lets go Avhis, let's get you to town." Cassandra held out his hand to help Avhis stand up.
Avhis tooks a good look at Cassandra. Cassandra wasn't much older then he was. A little shorter,
with a long face, pale skin, toned muscles, blonde hair, and bright round blue eyes. To Avhis,
she seemed like an angel. A beautiful face, long curly blonde hair that gently rolled down to
her shoulders, serene eyes, and illuminated with the full moon at her back. Silently, Avhis
grabbed her hand, and stood up.
The soldier dropped to the ground dead. After waiting a minute, the knight resumed his original
stance, with his hands resting on his sword. Every single soldier from the Dreta empire was shocked
into terror. The captain of the proud Dreta Empire was quite literally shaking in his boots.
Gathering his resolve, he channeled his fear into anger.
"That's IT!" The captain shouted. Once more, he pointed his sword at the knight. "Everyone!
CHARGE!! TAKE THIS BRIDGE!!" The soldiers, emboldened by their numbers, and by their captain's
anger, grabbed their spears and swords and all rushed on the bridge at once. The gap between the
knight and the soldiers was closing.
"Jack: Gwendolen, it is a terrible thing for a man to find out suddenly that all his life he has been speaking nothing but the truth."
Last edited by Falsum; 05-22-2009 at 11:24 PM..
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