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Dura Made My Sig
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Houston, Texas
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05-08-2009, 02:20 AM
Well, ZEE, it should be very similar to the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. That is a great source of inspiration and reference to me. However, the story is all mine hah hah.
At Duratrix: I guess you're right, it is just as long. I dunno why i thought it was so short... and don't blame me too much for the misspelling of the name. Jiang Xi is pronounced (jee-awhng shee), while Xiang ji is pronounced (shee-awhng jee). Very similar when pronounced with the correct accent hah hah... and i'll check for those errors you mentioned...
At any rate: here is chapter four. Chapters 2 and 3 didn't have much action, but Chapter Four is the start of the campaign against Zhang Yang, Han Fu's rival(in my story at least). Enjoy!
Clarification: "winded" in the first sentence, is meant to be read as "whine-did", like a toy. It's meant to emphasis the fact that the hills are scattered everywhere, and the wind(win-duh) has to wind(whine-duh) to get through them. hah hah...
(Continued from previous post(obviously))
"Not bad, but your style is as wild as a tiger. Unfocused strikes relying merely on raw power and
instinct. However, you do have great potential." Zhang He critiqued Xiang Ji as he helped the
beaten fighter up. Xiang Ji, although defeated, laughed as he gladly accepted Zhang He's help.
Li Feng, still enraged at his humiliation, stormed off towards the house. Li Ji followed after
him, a little envious of Xiang Ji's natural fighting ability. Han Xin, however, rushed through
the crowd to cheer on Xiang Ji. After a couple hours of eating and celebration, Xiang Ji and
Han Xin seperated from Zhang He and the rest of the crowd, and headed back to their house.
Awaiting them at the house were sets of clothes in piles designated for each person, and a suit
of new armor. A rolled piece of parchment sat next to the suit of armor. Xiang Ji took it and
unrolled it. It read: "The battle is soon. In 7 days, we will march out and meet Zhang Yang's
troops at Hu Gate." Xiang Ji placed the piece of paper back down on the table, and smiled.
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Chapter Four: Trial
A cool breeze wound it's way through the hills. Xiang Ji looked behind him. 3,500 troops marched
behind him, in perfected rank and file. Stoic faces, calming themselves before the battle, the
troops marched to the beat of war drums, holding their spears against their shoulders. Xiang Ji
too, marched. He didn't quite like horses, and he didn't trust his riding abilities enough to
fight on one. Xiang Ji turned back around to face foward. He had to march from Ye a few days
early, scouts had reported Zhang Yang's troops, under the command of Mu Shun, were already
marching towards Ye, and had even crossed Hu Gate. Xiang Ji was dispatched immedietly to
respond to the threat. Xiang Ji never even got to apologize to Li Feng for stabbing him.
Xiang Ji was incredibly nervous. He didn't have the confidence yet to command troops, and he only
had a days worth of training at Ye. The area around where he was, was also very uneven, with rolling
hills in all directions higher than a man. Xiang Ji held up his left hand, and the force behind
him ground to a halt. A few people were running up the path to the army. Advance scouts.
"Mu Shun's troops are just up ahead. They number around 5,000 men strong," One of the scouts
heaved out, completely worn out. Xiang Ji turned around to address his troops.
"Umm... set up camp..." Xiang Ji looked around nervously, he still wasn't used to giving commands.
"There, in between those hills there." Xiang Ji pointed to a small valley created by three hills.
Immedietly, the troops began to shuffle over to the designated spot, and unpack supplies, pitch
tents, and relax from their long march. Xiang Ji after observing for a couple of minutes, climbed
to the western most hill, and looked out. The enemy army was setting up camp a couple of miles
away. Xiang Ji turned and started to walk down the hill to the fledling camp.
"Don't remove your armor, and don't put away your spears just yet," Xiang Ji shouted out, then he
spoke individually to the advance scouts, telling each one to stand guard on a different hill
of the ones surrounding the camp.
A couple of hours passed, and night had begun to fall. Xiang Ji, once again on the hill, was
observing the enemy encampment and the terrain.
"Captain, aren't you going to rest with us?" an assistant officer asked Xiang Ji. Xiang Ji,
deep in thought, waited for a couple minutes before responding.
"Ready about 1000 of our best troops. We are marching as soon as it is dark. Prepare oil and
torches." The assistant officer ran off to fulfill his orders.
Xiang Ji and his troops crept silently through the hills, crouched low, stifling as best they
could the clang of their equipment, on the watch for scouts. After a couple of hours of this
covert march, the sounds of the enemy camp grew louder and louder, and then, softer and softer.
Xiang Ji had passed the enemy camp, and were circling to behind the highest hill in the area.
Getting an archer to shoot the scout at the top of the hill, Xiang Ji, brought his troops up to
the top of the hill as quietly and as low to the ground as they possibly could. At the summit,
Xiang Ji looked down. This hill was perfect, it perfectly overlooked the enemy camp.
"Alright, let's do it." Xiang Ji whispered. Without regard to being noticed now, the soldiers
stood up in groups holding vats of oil. Half of the groups, with great effort, heaved the oil
down toward the camp. Opening mid flight and oil flying in all directions, they crashed into the
camp on the close side to the hill. The other half rolled the roil vats down the hill, hurtling
through tents before breaking on something hard. The entire enemy camp was in a panic, scrambling
to get their weopans and gear, and locate their enemy, they didn't even notice what was in the
vats. Shortly, it started to rain fire on the camp. Xiang Ji and his troops were quickly lighting
and throwing their torches onto the enemy camp, lighting up the entire night sky, deep red flames
blazed across the camp, black smoke climbed to the heavens. Soon, Mu Shun had rallied some of his
troops, and were starting to retreat north.
"CHHAAAAAARRGGEE!!!!" Xiang Ji roared as he pointed at the enemy troops fleeing for their lives.
Their footsteps shook the ground as Xiang Ji and his thousand troops stormed down the hill like
wild boars, running to gore their prey. With Xiang Ji taking the point, the Ye troops slammed
into the flank of the fleeing troops. Spears flashing, thrusting, swinging, any of Zhang Yang's
forces unlucky enough to meet a Ye soldier, was promptly killed. Xiang Ji as well, without care
for his own safety, once again ran as fast as he could through the fleeing troops, swinging
his spear wildly at any thing withing in his range. Before too long, Xiang Ji met Mu Shun,
fleeing with soldier's around him. When Mu Shun noticed Xiang Ji, he stopped his flight and turned
around.
"You men keep on going," Mu Shun ordered some troops who had stopped with him. "Well, you routed
us this time, but we won't give up so easily!" With that, Mu Shun drew his sword, and rushed Xiang
Ji. Xiang Ji, who was incredibly tired after running through the troops as he just did, could
barely block Mu Shun's sword. Xiang Ji jumped a few paces back, before the next sword stroke cut
him in two. At a much safer distance, Xiang Ji readied his stance, the same stance he used
during training. Taking a step foward at a time, he advanced slowly. Relying on the length
advantage his spear over Mu Shun's sword, xiang Ji made short, quick, swings keeping Mu Shun at
his spear's length. With Xiang Ji sluggish from exhaustion, Mu Shun could easily deflect the
spear sweeps with his sword, but Mu Shun still could not advance a single step. Xiang Ji
relentlessly attacked Mu Shun, stopping only long enough to run a soldier who was fleeing too close
to the duel through. Very soon, Ye troops caught up to the duel between Mu Shun and Xiang Ji.
Mu Shun, although he could not advance towards Xiang Ji, had no trouble escaping in the opposite
direction. Xiang Ji stopped his troops from pursuing any longer. Mu Shun had escaped, and had
probably gone back to Hu Gate or Jin Yang, which was where Zhang Yang was magistrate. Returning
to camp victorious, Xiang Ji and the Ye troops celebrated their victory, and rested the rest of
the night.
The next day, Xiang Ji gave the order to break camp, and they marched onto Hu Gate, the first
objective of the campaign. Xiang Ji held no fears now. He completely routed the Jin Yang troops,
and he was much more confident in his ability to lead. He was sure that the next fight would be
at Hu Gate. Which is why Xiang Ji was so surprised when he and his troops rounded a curve in the
road that went around a hill. Tents and flags belonging to Jin Yang troops were pitched further
down the road.
I guess they didn't retreat all the way back, Xiang Ji thought. Confident in his abilities,
the morale of his army, and the lack of morale in the enemy army, Xiang Ji marched straight
toward the enemy camp. After awhile, Xiang Ji grew un easy. He saw very little people, and the
ones he did see, where not moving very much. He ordered a halt, and called two of his advance
scouts to go check the enemy camp. Waiting nervously, Xiang Ji couldn't help feeling something
was wrong. Just as he ordered his troops to retreat a mile, the two guards came running back.
(Continued next post... Sorry!)
"Jack: Gwendolen, it is a terrible thing for a man to find out suddenly that all his life he has been speaking nothing but the truth."
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