[Darkchao45]

I admit I had to re-read that poem 3 times to fully understand it. Elusive Mind mentioned
"Two months, five days, twelve hours, and fifteen minutes since that day." as his favorite line, which is mines as well. I think you may have a knack for suspense or thriller, perhaps even horror. Try making more poems or stories with those elements, Id be interested to see how it turns out.