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Default 01-15-2011, 12:23 PM

niceee poem there gee~!


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Thumbs up 01-15-2011, 01:09 PM

I will pluck their eyes and gather them like money
And suck their brains and harvest them like honey


^ it's CREEEEEEPY!! but i like the poem hehe..


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Default 01-15-2011, 01:51 PM

its realy good...

i love this part...

I will pluck their eyes and gather them like money
And suck their brains and harvest them like honey


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Default 01-15-2011, 01:55 PM

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its realy good...

i love this part...

I will pluck their eyes and gather them like money
And suck their brains and harvest them like honey
^i agree!!


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Thumbs up Best Part - 01-15-2011, 06:49 PM

pauuliee it is not a satanic poem but surely describes the dark one. Thank you shadow.tearz and aimiko63 for pointing out your favorite part. It is creepy but the best part indeed.
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Default 01-16-2011, 03:17 PM

Good job. :]


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Default 01-16-2011, 07:17 PM

Thanks xXAsmiXx for your remarks!
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Post The Parade of Seven (Poem) - 01-16-2011, 07:58 PM

Inspired by the works of Neil Gaiman’s “The Sandman”

The Parade of Seven

I welcome you to the parade of the eternal
Seven beings that is both fraternal and maternal
In this land that is equally delightful and infernal
In a story that is both a magnum opus and communal

Let us begin with whom we are deeply ill-fated
Whose irresistible kiss we are absolutely infatuated
In the edge of insanity she is always haplessly situated
For Desire is a name not so simple but very complicated

With a sniff of your calming scent you drive us to sleep
Yet your stench poisons our mind so utterly deep
For you are Dream that makes us laugh and weep
Smoking away our burned realities that is ours to keep

Fear is a black raven that spreads your ominous message
For Destruction whose empty soul is relentless and savage
A monster in an armor made of the rotting meat of carnage
Drinking the blood of innocence without prejudice of cause and age

Silence whispers a lullaby into the dirt which I dread and disown
Because its seeds are not wanted and should be absolutely thrown
For Death is a flower that blossoms swiftly were ever naively sown
Scattering like a lethal virus that eats our very own flesh and bone

Futility is a storm that floods overgrown and unkempt mind
While Despair is a pretentious lifeboat which is always close behind
It is a million worms of memories fit together and intertwined
Just like a crushed human brain that is scarred and undermined

Let us not dwell in the vast islands of absence and longing
For Delirium is a shadow that roams and dwells in its belonging
Creeping in our consciousness like the mist coming and going
Showing all forms of visions and spirits not of our own doing

Finally, let us not depend upon our fortune on Destiny our brother
For he does not recognize our dreams and sees it as a bother
But only accepts birth and death as our true father and mother
And stir our hearts and stomachs from one place and into another


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I hope that you would like it too.
But if not, I will send to you all seven beings!
Hehehe. I'm only joking!
Please post your remarks and suggestions. Thank you as always.
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Default 01-17-2011, 12:30 AM

hmmm, maybe I'm bad at this, but I couldn't really figure out all of the seven beings .

It was awesome, I liked it alot, I hope I can reach your level and surpass you if I'm lucky


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Default 01-17-2011, 03:40 AM

Seventh Being would be the first paragraph?
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