[Asmi]

Something I wrote loooong ago. Baka Baka helped me a little bit.

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Using all her body strength to pull her suitcase between a small crowd, she spotted him way ahead, in a brown coat and a nervous look on his face. At the sight of him, her heart began to pound faster, and it got faster as the distance between them kept decreasing.

She started fixing her hair when she got nearer; she smiled, and shifted her hair away from her eyes. Her hands were getting colder as the distance closes, while dragging her luggage.


When she's just a few feet away, he quickly walked up and took her bags from her, but she protested that she was fine. In the end, he still took them without her permission.

“Hey there. Wait, no, leave it, you’re tired and it was a long flight. You’re small too, so it would be a burden on you.” He said while chuckling a little.

She laughed a little but took hold of herself and raised an eyebrow at him.

“We finally meet. This somehow feels like a dream.”

He changed the subject and smiled at her again. “It does.” as she smiled back.

She fixed her shirt again even though it didn’t need to be fixed. That shows how nervous she was.

”Uh…So... how was the flight?” he asked, scratching his head, just as nervous.

“It was long and tiring.” And then there was a pause.

"So-"
"you look" both spoke together.

“Go on.” He said.
“No, no, you first.” She replied.

“No, ladies first.” He chuckled while smiling at her, sliding her laptop bag up his shoulder.
“Um, I was going to say that you look nice in that shirt. But why didn’t you wear the one I-"

Before she could finish, he lifted her chin up and gazed into her eyes. She knew he was about to do what she had dreamt of at night and day. She prayed every single day to be with him... To be embraced by him... To be loved by him... And for him to take...

Her first kiss.

She closed her eyes slowly and he brought his lips close to hers. Before she knew it, his lips were being pressed against hers slowly, and his hand was sliding around her waist.

He gently pulled her into him, and held her with both hands, and kissed even more. She was standing on her toes and softly feeling his arms. Before long, he parted her lips with his, and she pushed him away.

“Are you crazy? We’re in the middle of an airport!” She said while flustering like crazy. Her cheeks were hot and her hands were shaking slightly.

“Hey, this is America, its fine here.” He smiled.
“No... I don’t like this stuff, you know that. Stupid.”

She picked up her bag and fixed her shirt and hair again. He smiled and said “Hey, by the way, nice mint.” and laughed, as she hid her smile and hit him with her bag.

As they both began heading towards the exit, he called her name from behind.

“Yes?” she turned around.
“Guess what?” He stopped and said.
“What? Did I forget something?” she looked curiously at him. He walked up to her and brought his face close to her ear.
"I love you." He whispered while kissing her cheek and walked away.

“I love you too, idiot.” she said to herself while speeding up, and started walking next to him.

[Shadow Tearz]

hmmm...it's nice glance of a piece...but the story lacks...like you cant tell what the story about...nice try asee...

[Asmi]

Originally Posted by shadow.tearz

hmmm...it's nice glance of a piece...but the story lacks...like you cant tell what the story about...nice try asee...

Lol, that's the point. It's not a story, just some random writing I thought I should share.
Thanks anyway. :]

[Spectre456]

kinda reminds me of Richelle Mead's style of writing in vampire academy...........

[alcaray]

Is she a mail-order bride?

[Asmi]

a what? .______.

[Spectre456]

Originally Posted by xXAsmiXx

a what? .______.

A mail order bride is basically a girl who was "bought" by a guy so he could marry her. In this case they are ordered online or through other methods and are then sent to the buyer......................... yep, thats how screwed up the world is.

[Asmi]

Originally Posted by spectre456

A mail order bride is basically a girl who was "bought" by a guy so he could marry her. In this case they are ordered online or through other methods and are then sent to the buyer......................... yep, thats how screwed up the world is.

Ew. that's not at all what she is!

[alcaray]

Your characters have never met before and they already are... ummm sucking face? That's faster than most mail order brides that I've heard of.

I have a friend who got a bride from Russia 10 years ago, or so. It has lasted longer than any of his prior relationships. She has had a little trouble adjusting to life in the US. She is a good lady. Russians are interesting.

[Asmi]

Originally Posted by alcaray

Your characters have never met before and they already are... ummm sucking face? That's faster than most mail order brides that I've heard of.

I have a friend who got a bride from Russia 10 years ago, or so. It has lasted longer than any of his prior relationships. She has had a little trouble adjusting to life in the US. She is a good lady. Russians are interesting.

That's weird. as hell.