[HeiBK201]

I'm not an English native speaker so I'm never confident of what i write. but I love expressing myself through poetry.
I made a collection of poems entitled "Ink Mood". I'm gonna post some of them here. if anyone interested in poetry please feel free to criticize

Darkroom
Here in this darkened room
Everything is a wonder
No walls, no ground, no roof
Just hands, a pen and a paper

The idea is to bloom,
When all words join together
Lifts me up to the blue moon
A kind of “self-chase matter”

I’m gonna cry very soon
For my soul can’t take this pressure
Tears will be shaped by the mood
Then all things will be clearer.

Untitled
There’s a tunnel
I’m walking through
To get to you

Unsent letters
On the table;
Scattered letters
On a burnt paper
Black coffee stains
Everywhere

This can’t be stopped
Not before I see
All of you,
Not before you feel
What I feel…

We are strangers
Separately
-You and me-
Strayed for a long time
into each other’s minds
beyond the iris
of our eyes

It seems endless
-with no shortcuts-
The tunnel that leads
to the truth
And the ones who
are seeking you
Should never
Complain
about the Pain…

[poeticas]

awesome ! love that untitled one ^^ i to am not English ... and love to express myself with writing and i like writing in English more than in my own language or any other ^^ nice work

[HeiBK201]

thanx Poeticas... and me too i love writing in English. it's a flexible language...
in fact I'm studying 1st year English Language in university now. next year, i'm gonna choose English Literature as my speciality...

[poeticas]

Originally Posted by HeiBK201

thanx Poeticas... and me too i love writing in English. it's a flexible language...
in fact I'm studying 1st year English Language in university now. next year, i'm gonna choose English Literature as my speciality...

nice ^^ my country doesn't provide English literature so i do self learning and till now i did self learning ^^ so i manage somehow ^^ even thought what i write has alot of typos i still try ^^

[HeiBK201]

my writing is not good enough to reach one of my dreams which is to become a poet and a novelist So i work hard too and without complains...

[poeticas]

Originally Posted by HeiBK201

my writing is not good enough to reach one of my dreams which is to become a poet and a novelist So i work hard too and without complains...

i write for my own satisfaction i think ... or just because i like it or as hobby it would be great to write a book one day i think sometimes ... but still i know that its not realistic for me but who know ^^ and good luck on ur dream !

[HeiBK201]

Originally Posted by poeticas

i write for my own satisfaction i think ... or just because i like it or as hobby it would be great to write a book one day i think sometimes ... but still i know that its not realistic for me but who know ^^ and good luck on ur dream !

thanx
in fact, it all started that way: writing only for my own satisfaction but eventually i found myself so into it... I'm realistic person except when start writing something... it's like having a split-personality lol ...

[Sid Greene]

Thanks for sharing your poems HeiBK201. Specially the "Untitled" poem which I might say expresses emotions. Great job and I hope to read more of your work.

[Shadow Tearz]

nice poems...i liked Untitled...
i do write some poems...but i dont have the courage like u to post...keep it up

[Sid Greene]

shadow.tearz please have the courage to post even one of your poems. Because you said that you do write poems, I am now curious of your work. Thanks in advance and looking forward to your work also.