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03-15-2010, 08:59 AM
My vote goes to #3.
1) The idea behind it I like, but the broken English killed it for me.
2) The rhyming is a little off at points due to select word usage, but I liked the premise, just like I did for #1.
3) The use of free verse is an interesting choice, which isn't done often. It's a good theme and just flows together well.
Thanks Weika, Dura, Bele, and S.T for the sigs!
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