This is actually hard this time around.
#2- Hello, Kingdom Hearts reference! I saw that and did a little fan girl squeal. All in all I really enjoyed it! Very nice job. Like it's been mentioned before a little previous history would have saved me from playing a guessing game in some spots- but that's about all.
#3 Besides a few grammar errors i noticed right off the bat (maybe I've been editing too much lately) I enjoyed this one probably the most. I would like to vote for it, but I feel like it dosent quite fit 'Adventure' all that well.
#4 .... Holy monkey balls. 25 pages- you WIN! Lol I will have to admit I didn't get through this whole story- I know it's not fair- but my limited time, attention span, and language skills got the best of me. What I DID read was top notch though!
#5- I had the different issue with this from number 5. It was too short and a tad too jumbled for me to read in spots, but I thought it was wonderfully written.
So what one did I vote for? Let me finish #4 and then I'll vote.
Dura- kick my butt if I forget to vote
