Looks good there Weika and thanks for the comments/Advice. Ill see what I can do.
Simple and nice. Try getting your render to flow along with your background a bit. Adding some C4Ds on dodge or screen layer layouts to the right side may help give it more composition(Might be too much of a nerdy word to use sorry)
Also I think the text will look better just below or in the middle of the right size along with a smaller font size and blending of the text, also important. But then again text is a matter of personal preference
anyways, nice work Weika