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Originally Posted by gundestiny
Haha loved it ^^
Punctuation errors every now and again but that's no biggy.
The story describes the atmosphere/scenery/situation perfectly and you can get a clear picture of Ashe's character in your head.
Executed awesomely and cured alot of my boredom xD
Nice work!~ gozaru
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lol, looks like a bad typo again. Her name isn't "ashe", I meant "she"