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07-04-2009, 05:29 PM
Entry 2 and 3 is really nice. I enjoy reading both of it. Sadly, I can't vote for both. I vote for entry 2. I like military/war story. And the author is doing a good job. The thing that concerns me is it needs more character development. But hey, short stories don't have much space to fit it in. So, I'll pass to complain about that aspect.
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